【用戶】寂寞行星
【年級】大二下
【評論內容】原本:Because he don't know what to say in an awkward situation, he always chooses to keep silent.用連接詞連接兩句:Because the girl didn’t know what to do, the girl who lost her way burst into tears. 用「分詞構句」表達這個句子:Not knowing what to do, the girl who lost her way burst into tears. 兩句主詞相同,可用「分詞構句」精簡句子。去掉「表原因」那句的連接詞和主詞,從 “didn’t know ” 可知為否定的主動語態,所以需改成 not Ving分詞構句。且分詞構句放句首記得打逗號。http://www.learnerhall.org/2012/11/blog-post_2007.html
【用戶】寂寞行星
【年級】大二下
【評論內容】原本:Because he don't know what to say in an awkward situation, he always chooses to keep silent.用連接詞連接兩句:Because the girl didn’t know what to do, the girl who lost her way burst into tears. 用「分詞構句」表達這個句子:Not knowing what to do, the girl who lost her way burst into tears. 兩句主詞相同,可用「分詞構句」精簡句子。去掉「表原因」那句的連接詞和主詞,從 “didn’t know ” 可知為否定的主動語態,所以需改成 not Ving分詞構句。且分詞構句放句首記得打逗號。http://www.learnerhall.org/2012/11/blog-post_2007.html